BeeFef's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[InstaSkillz- Calm Water]

Love the sound design, especially the arpeggios. However, the master is a bit bland and one thing I think may help is making the sounds more stereo, especially panning some of the notes differently, like the arpeggios. I would also recommend less dubstep sounding drums especially for the first part. Keep working at it! Also, I was thinking of collabing with you soon.

InstaSkillz responds:

this is cow turd, but thanks anyway!

[[FGS] The journey]

Was this inspired by Journey, the video game? Cool song, I like the ambience and variety. One little thing you could do is make the master a littler clearer on the high end. Just a suggestion though Good luck in the contest!

Ramn0 responds:

Thanks :-)
and no, it is not inspired by the video game, but more by the nature itself.

[Oxygen]

Sounds are good, but the melody's pretty reptetive and the mix is a bit empty. Good luck in the NGUAC

UnavailableSurm responds:

I realize, thank you!

[[Tsets] - Drumplay]

It sounds really soundscapey and dreamy! I like it, but I think if you had the really fast high hats you added in quieter in the mix, then it would sound even better!

[Lithosphere]

I like the chiptune influence in this song like the electro-bells that are panned way to the right, as well as the pitch bends.

I actually think the vocals sound cool for the most part, however, I think you could've equalized them a bit more to fit the rest of the song and maybe attempt to take out the background hum from the audio.

Something that I'm curious about is the clicks that happen every couple of measures sometimes, like at 2:53. Do you know what's causing them, because it doesn't sound brilliant.

But overall, it's really cool and fun song. Keep making music!

BlueCat6123 responds:

Thanks for your feedback,

I think the clicks are an audio error cause I used some old computer that didn't run too well, but that's just a guess.

Also, I really didn't do anything to vocals, other than change the volume a bit, And I attempted to take out background noises but I couldn't for some reason lol

[The Ascension]

I like all of the pads and stuff you add into it, like 1:53 when you add that string sounding thing in. One thing I think you could do is try to make it sound cleaner. With it mixed together and some of the pads having a long, loud release, it seemed a bit messy and chaotic, especially at 2:26. But it sounds nice and colorful. Good job.

kylermannn responds:

Aaaah haha yeah, there are definitely more than just a few poorly mixed and messy parts of the song. I'd take it down and work on it to try and fix some of that, but I'm like, 100% bored of this one.

Much appreciated though, man!
(It's funny how you'd pop in since I was just listening to a few of your songs at work today haha)

[Robot Nightmare]

This is a cool song, although it's more dubstep and trap than dance. The vocals in it are cool, but I think you overused them, If you used them more scarcely throughout the song. I think the little breakdown you have starting at 2:04 gets a bit too empty and wouldn't recommend taking it down to just a simple beat. The strings that get brought in at 3:35 are awesome, and I also enjoy that little dubstep noise you threw in at 4:21 or 4:22. The sudden ending is also a nice touch. Liked listening!

LoadFailed responds:

Thank you, I will use your recommendations for future songs!

[Sirius]

Cool song, I like the upwards computery sweep you used throughout the song, but I think you used it a bit too much. I also think it's too repetitive. It's pretty chill, though. If you did make it in 15 minutes, then that's really good work.

ST3O responds:

Thanks))

[Second Prayer (WIP)]

Good so far, however I would recommend making the compression smoother, it's a bit choppy. I like the different sounds you used to make up the melody. I can see how you were inspired by Lockyn.

[[Tsets] - On a Rainy Morning]

This is a really good song and you deserve more of a fanbase. The one thing about this is the drums could sound a little more realistic. But the overall vibe and harmony is pretty cool!

TsetsukenMusic responds:

Thank you!
I'm working pretty hard to gain a large fanbase but so far has been slow. I have been back and fourth between re-branding or not because I think that might be the problem there. Thank you for the review!!