BeeFef's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Evil (instrumental)]

This has a cool feel to it. I like the classic dubstep beat, and then for a moment at 1:48, you bring it to more of a D&B beat. A couple pieces of criticism I have, though, is making the sone longer and less repetitive. Hope this has helped!

[Destruction (DUBSTEP)]

The synth sounds are clean and it seems alright, but I recommend adding more detail in the background and giving the drums more dynamics to give it more of a professional feel. I like how you got the master to be really loud as well. Hope you had a nice birthday!

Also, what program do you use?

Nitram666 responds:

Thx mate :>
I use Fl studio 11 and 12

[Geoplex - Florescence]

You're right. The sounds are rich and the song's melodic. I like the combination of ambience and strings with the pixely arpeggio and lead (however, I don't think just that is original enough). However, I would like to complain about the main beat. The sample choice/creation isn't too bad, but it needs to be more complex in my opinion. It sounds like like just a kick snare, a high hat, and some noise. I like this track and I hope you get better.

Geoplex responds:

Fair enough. I think there's a time for complexity and a time for simplicity, but you can definitely call it subjective. Thanks for the feedback :)

[AIM - Crash and Fade]

This is a good track, however the drums could sound a bit cleaner, such as taking the flanger/chorus off the snare or turning it down a bit and having more variety in the open hats. Another thing is maybe having the song structure be more dynamic and also making the sine-sounding pad more stereophonic. Hope this helps!

Kalviter responds:

Thank you! I was worried about the snare, thought it might be a bit much, I'll try your fix and see if I like it. The structure's intentional, if only because I felt like a dying pilot experiencing tranquility should be given the proper ambiance and slowness. Whether it has artistic merit is another matter lol. Again, thanks so much for the feedback!

[Daybreak]

This is a pretty good song. I like the chords and the beat. One thing that might fit somewhat well is a melodic lead and/or vocals in this. It would add more to the hooks of the song and fill the empty space a bit. Keep making music!

Lockyn responds:

I tried to keep it more simplistic this time, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyways!

[Heliophysics]

The intro to this pretty neat. I like how it sort of expands out. You should more instruments throughout the song, as well as different melodies. I think you need more variation in the beat, especially since it's a D&B song. The bass is really good, and it's actually a little overwhelming. You seems to sound like a huge engine for a galactic spaceship or something. It's a cool song. Keep up the good work!

[Dubwolfer - Ancestry]

It's calm and chill, the beat's not bad, but I would like more of a definable melody. It's a good song.

Dubwolfer responds:

Thanks! Yeah, this was a few months back, I think I've got a bit better grasp on melodicism now. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even with the few wrong notes I'd put in there.

Thanks for listening!

[The End Of Everything]

The beats pretty cool. It's not too repetitive. The synth choice is okay, one thing I would suggest is to make that fat sweeping bass in the chorus a bit more harmonic, or maybe it's just my headphones. The bell lead is a little bit catchy as well. Cool song.

jjoon responds:

Thank you :)

[Frequency VIP]

I can hear that the piano track is looping over and over. in this song. I would suggest to either make a sample and play that, or use a virtual piano or piano sample that's built into your DAW. The growls that start at 1:03 and go to 1:22 are unneccissarily offbeat, but they do sound cool. I would've liked to hear a transition with the key change at 1:22 to smoothen the song out. The drum filler didn't really fit very well either, and the pause that lasted half a bar just after made it worse. However, the song progresses fairly well, and the sounds aren't too bad, except that many of them sound a bit mono.

DJ-Sirius responds:

Okay :D

[Pluck Away]

This is a pretty unique song. One thing I would like to see is the song go more places. I doesn't progress much and it's very repetitive. The sounds weren't too bad, though. Keep improving!

FanIncorperated responds:

Thanks! Maybe I'll remaster it and make it different