BeeFef's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ascension]

I like all of the pads and stuff you add into it, like 1:53 when you add that string sounding thing in. One thing I think you could do is try to make it sound cleaner. With it mixed together and some of the pads having a long, loud release, it seemed a bit messy and chaotic, especially at 2:26. But it sounds nice and colorful. Good job.

kylermannn responds:

Aaaah haha yeah, there are definitely more than just a few poorly mixed and messy parts of the song. I'd take it down and work on it to try and fix some of that, but I'm like, 100% bored of this one.

Much appreciated though, man!
(It's funny how you'd pop in since I was just listening to a few of your songs at work today haha)

[Robot Nightmare]

This is a cool song, although it's more dubstep and trap than dance. The vocals in it are cool, but I think you overused them, If you used them more scarcely throughout the song. I think the little breakdown you have starting at 2:04 gets a bit too empty and wouldn't recommend taking it down to just a simple beat. The strings that get brought in at 3:35 are awesome, and I also enjoy that little dubstep noise you threw in at 4:21 or 4:22. The sudden ending is also a nice touch. Liked listening!

LoadFailed responds:

Thank you, I will use your recommendations for future songs!

[Sirius]

Cool song, I like the upwards computery sweep you used throughout the song, but I think you used it a bit too much. I also think it's too repetitive. It's pretty chill, though. If you did make it in 15 minutes, then that's really good work.

ST3O responds:

Thanks))

[[Tsets] - On a Rainy Morning]

This is a really good song and you deserve more of a fanbase. The one thing about this is the drums could sound a little more realistic. But the overall vibe and harmony is pretty cool!

TsetsukenMusic responds:

Thank you!
I'm working pretty hard to gain a large fanbase but so far has been slow. I have been back and fourth between re-branding or not because I think that might be the problem there. Thank you for the review!!

[Destruction (DUBSTEP)]

The synth sounds are clean and it seems alright, but I recommend adding more detail in the background and giving the drums more dynamics to give it more of a professional feel. I like how you got the master to be really loud as well. Hope you had a nice birthday!

Also, what program do you use?

Nitram666 responds:

Thx mate :>
I use Fl studio 11 and 12

[Geoplex - Florescence]

You're right. The sounds are rich and the song's melodic. I like the combination of ambience and strings with the pixely arpeggio and lead (however, I don't think just that is original enough). However, I would like to complain about the main beat. The sample choice/creation isn't too bad, but it needs to be more complex in my opinion. It sounds like like just a kick snare, a high hat, and some noise. I like this track and I hope you get better.

Geoplex responds:

Fair enough. I think there's a time for complexity and a time for simplicity, but you can definitely call it subjective. Thanks for the feedback :)

[AIM - Crash and Fade]

This is a good track, however the drums could sound a bit cleaner, such as taking the flanger/chorus off the snare or turning it down a bit and having more variety in the open hats. Another thing is maybe having the song structure be more dynamic and also making the sine-sounding pad more stereophonic. Hope this helps!

Kalviter responds:

Thank you! I was worried about the snare, thought it might be a bit much, I'll try your fix and see if I like it. The structure's intentional, if only because I felt like a dying pilot experiencing tranquility should be given the proper ambiance and slowness. Whether it has artistic merit is another matter lol. Again, thanks so much for the feedback!

[Daybreak]

This is a pretty good song. I like the chords and the beat. One thing that might fit somewhat well is a melodic lead and/or vocals in this. It would add more to the hooks of the song and fill the empty space a bit. Keep making music!

Lockyn responds:

I tried to keep it more simplistic this time, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyways!

[Dubwolfer - Ancestry]

It's calm and chill, the beat's not bad, but I would like more of a definable melody. It's a good song.

Dubwolfer responds:

Thanks! Yeah, this was a few months back, I think I've got a bit better grasp on melodicism now. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even with the few wrong notes I'd put in there.

Thanks for listening!

[The End Of Everything]

The beats pretty cool. It's not too repetitive. The synth choice is okay, one thing I would suggest is to make that fat sweeping bass in the chorus a bit more harmonic, or maybe it's just my headphones. The bell lead is a little bit catchy as well. Cool song.

jjoon responds:

Thank you :)